Monday, August 21, 2006

Models Wanted

Models Wanted

Notice that girl-
especially that boy-

So pretty.
And there is something about them.

Something lasting- longing.
Eyes- unsparked.

That's it!
That's why I'm drawn!

Look: vacant.
It: I'll fill.

-Matthew Koutzun

1 comment:

Rachel said...

i'm very much amazed at your insight on my last poem. it was based on something highly raw and very fresh. the fact that you picked up on the entire mood was flattering. thank you.

your poem here reveals much about yourself. the desire to complete others, what a deep concept. the telling line in this is "So pretty." because in the scheme of things, what a dull compliment coming from a master of words. it completes this.